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It's sad that that kind of thing does happen in life. I thought the poem was interesting and it makes people awear that there is evil in this world and ...

Space that was just rude. Sorry I didn't really read this yet.

I liked this also. I don't really have much other than that to say sorry. Oh, bbb you spell wow funny. lol

l like how the rainbow is a sign of happiness and how the rain is a sign of sadness. It has nice symbolism. But I hear it's better to live ...

There are a lot of people in today’s world that are extremely stupid and lack the ability to think. They have no idea what the consequences of their action are. ...

Wow you most be really gansta. lol

It does need a point and perhaps some more action. It many just talks about the horse. You should try to make something exciting happen.

I would like to thank everyone for helping.

I think it's good so far. You had some errors that you need to fix.

Well, I happend t enjoy it. The only thing I see is that hand should be hands. Although, I didn't really look hard for any errors. :D

Thanks for helping.

"Her eyes were blind, she couldn't see." I think sense the first sentence is in the past tense then, "I realize it's a mirror I'm looking in." should be I ...

Life was hard for me also. I had to deal with a ton of insults and humiliation.

I didn't notice anything wrong with it so, nice job.

"He tries to reach the sky But is swallowed by the darkness of guilt." I think you could also say that he reaches for the sky but is swallowed by ...