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I really enjoyed this piece. I am heavily critical of poetry because it likes to fall into 3 distinct cliched categories "complaints" "I love you" "Dreck." This did not fall ...

Over all I enjoyed the piece. The imagery is bold and dark and I live for stuff like that. The imagery was stronger at the begining, but that is ok ...

This poem evoked a series of interesting emotions in me. To start it made me pity the young girl that you depict for her sadness and pain alone. Then as ...

I have to make my opinion clear on this one. I admire the decision and the balls it took to put something this powerful, this controversial, this bold on paper. ...

This was absolutely brilliant. I loved the use of imagery and the significance of the lines each break and line held a certain amount of weight and significance and that ...

First off I loved this poem. The whimsical nature it had served to hid serious undertones, as each little stanza was a separate statement in the whole of the poem. ...

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece. The imagery was brilliant, and definitely made the reality tangible. The story line itself made the piece feel like an actuality when it turned out ...

As a first poem it was decent. I would say that the rhyming was good, but could use a little diversity. I would try playing a little more with slant ...

I was actually a huge fan of this piece. The imagery was compelling and didn't just serve as awful useless fluff thrown in because it's a poem (which can often ...

I honestly have mixed feelings about this piece. On one hand, the scattered nature of the prose and the almost random way it moved was enjoyable. On the other hand, ...

I definitely liked this poem. It was complete, it followed your meter, it had a tangible story line and the rhymes worked well and held together thematically. A lot of ...

I really enjoyed this piece. It was empowering, and the use of a storm as a metaphor was striking and it definitely accomplished its goal. I have recently been exposed ...

This was phenomenal, I love how the build up to the ending. It was so dark and held death as a theme but then culminating in love that could not ...

I definitely relate to the anger in the piece. I love angry poetry in part because it is the most raw form and because I find I do my best ...

Over all I thought it was decent. I liked the contrast of the italicized bits that helped add to the narrative nature of the piece. I did not like, however ...