theironnovelist

my friend, that is the beauty. if you can't think about it for yourself, why should I? but believe me, I have. I have my theories. But everyone can have ...

ehh sorry it sent twice X)

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ooooh ooh hehe that's about all I can say. I honestly don't have much to nitpick about. Poetry is hard to review as it is all about the author's preference ...

thanks. again. i feel like i should reply to everything. and, again, I don't know why exactly but I think in order to make the reader think for themselves (especially ...

thanks! I wrote this years ago...XD I'm glad it still sounds good! I made this intentionally with very little description of the characters and background, and paid more attention to ...

thanks! ooh yeah i forgot to add the word 'candle'. it was meaning the literal flame from the candle she was holding, but then 'she let it burn' was also ...

ah yes I had so many typos in this one!! XD thanks for pointing them out- I've been out of it tonight.

no problem! you could add hyphens, maybe (just a suggestion)

oh, and actually the typo wasn't an error, you may have read it wrong. I should arrange it better :)

oh thanks for that typo! I've decided to keep the characters nameless and, thus far, keep dialogue out. I want this to be the kind of story that the reader ...

thanks very much! I have ideas of continuing this in short bits, but I also love a good ending that leaves the rest up to the minds of the readers. ...

thanks! I literally just wrote it from inspiration of my Grandma's back room. Little backstory. I'll consider it!

thanks! I realize some sentences are fragments, but that's mostly for the effect of voice.

'course not, i'm a writer XD. i'll teach you formatting sometime. it's weird on here

wow! thanks so much! I really appreciate it you have no idea :D!