thehotinpsychotic

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! Critique comes first. Just a lot of silly mistakes in this work. In the first sentence, the tenses change. "Echoed" is in past tense, and ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I liked this. I agree with the other reviewer, how it's not like a lot of other songs so it sticks out a little. On ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I agree with this, as people do seem to write about death or self-harm as an easy way to make a dramatic piece. But like ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I really like the idea of this poem, but I don't think it's fitting for a haiku. I think something as small as a line ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I loved this, but I really wish it were longer. It was too brief for my taste, and I feel like while this would've been ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I love the title, and really like the idea of writing a poem for Valentine's Day. The flow was good and the phrasing was as ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I agree with the other reviewer; the governor part was interesting but random. The fight scene was unexplained; as were the characters. Also, try using ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! First off, I love Doctor Who, Supernatural, and Sherlock (the Tumblr holy trinity), so of course I wanted to read it. So a lot of ...

So um, I don't know what to think. It started off pretty well, but then it just kind of got random and strange. Also, too big of a cliffhanger. It ...

Hey, thehotinpsyhchotic here to review! So, the very first sentence is a run on. You can put a period after the "scream as loud as I can" to fix that. ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! Having played Slenderman myself, I was drawn to this story. Now, I really liked it. I didn't notice any grammar errors or any hints of ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! First, some nitpicks. details, far to small." It should be "far too small," since it's before an adjective. "....burns with ever word." Seems like a ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! First off, here's some grammar nitpicks: "Me and my parents moved to a new house". It should be "My parents and I moved to a ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! So, being a big fan of Doctor Who, this sucked me in. Such a cute story and idea. My only critique is that it's best ...

Hey, thehotinpsychotic here to review! I was initially pulled in because the idea was so creative. And Cinderella being called "Cindy" was just too cute. Did you have to do ...