thegirlwhofateloves

=D> Another fantastic piece! Loved it! :D The only thing I didn't like (lol - the only thing....mark me!) was the 'yumyumyum'....don't know why, i just didn't. I see why ...

I get it. I think - correct me if I'm wrong. They had a child together, but he never knew about her (Snoink: that's where the 'she' part comes in, ...

God, it doesn't seem all that long ago..... I was at school all day....then got home soon after the second plane crashed....first thing I heard when I opened the front ...

I really liked it....hell, you right a LOT better than most just-turned-14 year olds I know!!! :elephant: oh yes. The elephant is back, my friend....lol

Really? I haven't got much to say about this to be honest. I think you could probably do better. And I mean that in a nice, encouraging way, as oppose ...

'A goddess of la lune is she Her blood red lips lax and stark' - I loved those lines, they're gorgeous. Not so keen on 'she is but...' - but ...

I really liked this. It seemed complete and was great, because it's such a simple thing to write about, but very effective. It hits a nerve because I think a ...

Hmmm....actually I did quite like it. The idea's good. But....there was something lacking....I'm not sure exactly what, it was like some of the lines just didn't run together....which which jepordises

I liked this. I agree that it's got good imagery and I liked the way the lines carry on through the poem and the way the stories all link seamlessly. ...

Orwell is a total dude. All his stuff rocks. I love 1984, I think it's one of the best books I've ever read. It was really quite revolutionary for it's ...

I keep meaning to read that, it's on my bookshelf and everything. Mainly because I feel I should because that dude was from my town or something. We've got a ...

I read that book so much when I was younger that the book's falling apart! I love it and I have to say it made me cry because it's just ...

I think the title explains it all. I've got a similar kind of poem at home that I might put on here...except it may have to be edited a teeny ...

That's the whole point though....you can't string sentances together to describe an emotion like that. Sometimes words are just more effective. Maybe it isn't what might be called a poem ...

You've summed up exactly how I feel about cigarettes in one poem! That's quite impressive! It's a baaaad habit and I'm trying to quit....but I accidently went and bought a ...