thegilliangill

Howdy there! This is really good. It's pretty amazing what you can manage to make some lyrics out of. In fact this was surprisingly good for the task! It dpesn't ...

Howdy there! This made me laugh a lot! It was so comical, it's good to see a non-depressive piece of writing for a change! I don't usually listen to this ...

Howdy there! This is pretty good just a few points When I think of us I nice use of enjambment here remember how you how you hold my hand. this ...

Howdy there! This is very very good and the use of enjambment was great, however just a few things. Firstly this is very long, possibly it drags on for a ...

Howdy there! What else can I say but wow? Lyrics seem to come naturally to you. This was some what amazing. At first glance I wasn't sure if it was ...

Howdy there! I just wanted to say I love the content of your set of lyrics and I think the way you set it out was perfect however it was ...

Howdy there! I really liked this chapter it really showed the emotional and physical pain that your character Alison was going through which is important in a novel as without ...

Howdy there! Wow! Technically, this one of the best poems I have seen on this website for many reasons. Firstly, I loved the layout, it helped your poem flow easily ...

Howdy there! I thought this was a cute little poem and for me it really worked. The layout helped a lot, the use of enjambment helped it to flow a ...

Howdy there! I think this is very good to be honest. However I have just a few nitpicks. Here I think you meant 'war-torn' rather than war- torn. It all ...

Howdy there! I think this is a very goo poem, and it is evident that your vocabulary range exceeds the norm so well done for that. A also picked on ...

Howdy there! I think this poem is really good! The length really suits the style so well done. Only a few little nitpicks here Firstly, you have spelt disappeared wrong. ...

Howdy there! I thought that this is a great start! I really liked the imagery used. I do agree with BelarusBirdy's changes. It just really needs to be proof read. ...

Howdy there! I think your poem has a good start, however I think it is very short, and although it stands well on its own, it could easily be developed ...

Howdy there! I really liked your poem! I do agree that this poem needs a rating due to it's language content but that can easily be fixed. I really liked ...