thecolorofthesky

Hi there! I don't think I can do a full review, but I have a few comments. There is a lot of stumbling over words here. The capitalization and punctuation ...

Hey there! thecolorofthesky here for a short review! Let's jump in! Line I: This is short and simple, but I feel as if there is a stronger word than "old". ...

Hey there! It's thecolorofthesky here to review your poem. To start, I appreciate the concept of this poem, but it seems like the ideas need to be synthesized. There are ...

Hi there! thecolorofthesky here for a review your work! Stanza I: The word "mutter" seems out of place with the theme of your poem. Diction is a puissant element in ...

Hey Cas! I'm going to do a short review on your poem! I haven't been on in a while, but I love that you are getting out of the stiff ...

I am not good at reviewing and in fact, have not done it in a while, but here we go. To start, I like the title. It's simple. You could ...

Hey there! It's Sky here on this lovely evening! I haven't reviewed in a while, but here goes. This poem is quite short and lacks much depth, but it has ...

Hey there! Sky here with a review for your poem. Let's jump in! I like to read the poems in my head, then out loud, to find the flow. The ...

Hello! It's Sky here to review your poem. Let's jump in! The structure of the poem is very long with all of the couplets. There is no imagery or strong ...

Hey there! Short review for your lovely poem. First off, I love the style of the poem. The theme is amazing as well. Although it is brief, you say a ...

Hey there! Sky here for a review in the last minutes of review day. To start, I really love the structure of this. The short lines in the last stanza ...

Heyo! Happy Review Day! Let's get going! I agree with kog; you should focus on one or two jobs or characteristics of the phone. Maybe one for each stanza and ...

Hey Audy! First off, I must say I'm sad that I couldn't participate in the last two poetry jams. Ah, so it goes. The poem is short and beautiful. Brief ...

Heyo! It's thecolorofthesky on this fine review day. Let's get going! To start out, I think your mood for this is very rad. The way you executed it (no pun ...

Hello! Sky here with a short blurb of a review for you. I agree that it starts out devoid of emotion, tone, mood, etc. As I read on, the elements ...