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theRight_Shoe

  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Ryder R. Hood

    Hello there! I really liked this story! It was dark, gritty and had a crazy killer!! It was perfect!! And I absolutely loved Wolfe!! Great job!

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Other, Realistic Re: The Music Plays Again Tonight

    ... Excuse me while I go get a box of tissues. (FYI- AMAZING job!) *Gets the box* 1 min later... *Finishes the box*

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    Hello there, Thanks so much. I really didn't expect it to turn out so depressing but well, I guess you cannot make death sound fun or happy huh? Either ways ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    Hiya! Well first of all thanks for the suggestions! And second of all; honestly, I myself have no idea what or why I wrote that poem. Or where I wanted ...

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Stars were Falling

    This was just perfect! It was happy then it was sad! It was sweet and tragic. It was... really truly a job well done!

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Hourglass shatters.

    Apr 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If the shoe fits

    Hello there... Thank you so so much for your review! I will definitely look into your ssuggestions. Also, I posted the underlying meaning i wanted to drive home above (in ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If the shoe fits

    Hi! Well thanks for the review and the suggestions. Will definitely work on them. Okay now whats it about? Well i wrote it about greed. I basically personified greed and ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If the shoe fits

    Thanks a lot! And yaah... I will edit that bit. Makes sense! :)

    Dec 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Persephone's Daughter

    Wow... I love Greek mythology and that poem certainly made my day! There is something so haunted about the Greek gods and their sacrifice! The storyline is really beautiful and ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Demons

    Oops! bad!! :/

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i loved you four hundred and seventy days

    I... I think i will have to go now to have a bar of dark chocolate and to try to regain control over my blown mind! That.. was something! Not ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: By The Way, Your Mascara Is Smeared

    Hi there, this is... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!!! I am actually spell bound!! I love a poem with good satirical humor and this blew my mind right off its rocket. "If it helps, ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Ur Cming Rit *edited*

    Hey there... theRight-Shoe here! I loved the message that you were driving at! (pun intended) :) The title is what really sucked me in and the poem is beautifully written! ...

    Sep 1, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Demons

    Hey... Well this is my first review so my apologies for any crudeness! I loved the title!! It reminded me of Demons song by Imagine Dragons and considering its my ...

    Sep 1, 2014


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