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The feelings of relief and freedom stand out to me the most in this poem. I love the way you liken the speaker's unfettering to a bird taking to the ...

This story packs a lot of action and quite a bit of meaning within such a small word count! I won't go into corrections/grammar/anything like that since others have already ...

This is a very intense story, and it reads very well. The story of a woman who has resigned herself to the ways in which a toxic/abusive relationship can fool ...

#eattherich I love this poem and I love the underlying message. I think the metaphor of hungry ants works very well and the imagery you use is powerful -- "We ...

This was a very interesting story to read through, and I'm getting the feeling that both the characters and the context of the story each carry a certain symbolism -- ...

This poem conveyed a couple of conflicting emotions as I was reading, which I personally found made it all the more interesting. The second stanza in particular stood out to ...

This was an interesting poem to read from beginning to end. I get the sense that this piece was meant to emphasize the feelings of confusion and perhaps even frustration ...

So happy to have another chapter from you!! As with your first chapter, this one is a very easy read, which I think ensures that the reader is engaged throughout ...

I love the metaphors you use in this poem, and I mean this in a good way when I say that the last stanza reminded me of something that singer ...

All in all, this is a very interesting and captivating poem to read. I feel like it could have benefited from being broken up into a few different stanzas, but ...

I love the darker themes and imagery in this poem. I like that you repeat the word "sometimes" to keep a constant structure in terms of storytelling, and I also ...

I love the title and overarching theme of this poem. As @LZPianoGirl mentioned, I was expecting a poem about New Year's or perhaps something more related to commentary on ringing ...

This is a nice piece too read, very straightforward and clear with the plot/underlying message. I don't have many comments in terms of structure/formatting; you did a good job with ...

I like that this poem is very short and concise, and that it's more of a word association/scenery association poem than a long, drawn-out, plot-driven one. Leaving things up to ...

I love this poem and I especially love how clear it is and how smoothly it flows. You do a really good job of not straying from the main idea ...