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Love the use of imagery in this poem. This is probably one of the best examples of descriptive imagery that I've seen in a while. Specifically, I loved these lines: ...

Love this chapter as I have loved all the other ones! Some notes: there are a couple of places where you have some verb inconsistencies; one example is where she ...

I like that this poem is written in third person because it's always interesting to see how others view themselves vs. how strangers view them. Just thought I'd start by ...

Fantastic poem. You have such a beautiful way with words, and I like that you were very deliberate with your capitalization choices -- Death, Fear, and Time are the capitalized ...

I like that you chose to capitalize "Queer" rather than treat it as any other improper noun. This capitalization decision does a lot to emphasize the fact that this poem ...

Very sweet and concise poem, which I found works well in terms of the overarching theme. I like that this poem exudes a calm, yet passionate desire to fit into ...

The overall meaning of this poem was relatively clear, but there are some grammar/verb inconsistencies that make it a bit difficult to read through smoothly. These lines in particular caught ...

I'm not sure if it was intentionally written as humorous, but the final line made me chuckle a little bit. The idea of an elderly woman/man using their last breath ...

Beautiful poem. There is so much I love about the wording and the imagery stands out so much -- we get a good image of the speaker without ever having ...

I love this poem because I feel like it is so heavily layered. There seems to be so much going on in the speaker's mind, and that means there's a ...

Very interesting and intense poem here. As a fan of Thai food myself, I found it very poignant that you drew a connection between suffering at the hands of something ...

Very sweet and powerful poem about being totally enamored with someone. I think this explains a lot of relationships, especially the beginning stages when you're really getting into the throes ...

This poem is like a really strong and accurate description of my first semester away at university. I think you capture the feeling of being overwhelmed really well, because this ...

I'm not sure if this will make sense or even be considered an accurate interpretation of the poem's tone, but I kind of felt that this was more of a ...

Hi there! Tee here for a review. This was super interesting to read and analyze because I don't think I've ever seen a poem in which snow and frosty weather ...