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Re: Breaking of Mind
A strong point of this piece was your language and description, which is especially shown in the first paragraph, it really draws the reader in an creates some beautiful imagery. ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Some Swift Defense
A strong point of this piece was your language and description, which is especially shown in the first paragraph, it really draws the reader in an creates some beautiful imagery. ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Hidden in the Dark (Prologue)
A strong point of this piece was your language and description, which is especially shown in the first paragraph, it really draws the reader in an creates some beautiful imagery. ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: THE DIARY OF AN INDIAN
A strong point of this piece was your language and description, which is especially shown in the first paragraph, it really draws the reader in an creates some beautiful imagery. ...
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: The Common People versus Oppressive Russia
I realize this is long, but this piece would be stronger (and funnier) if it wasn't as easy to argue against. I'd consider focusing and then coming up with more ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Live It Up <3 <3
Hey! I've been on a review halt for a bit. But this brought me out of it, because I LOVE IT. XD I like the way that you arranged it ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: The Man on the Stage
I really enjoyed reading this :D the only thing that I would have to say is you didn't capitalize a couple things. Its awesome anyways :) tThis is my favorite ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Shattered Glass
That is so sad and yet, so perfect the way you described, the detail and work you must have put in. You're really talented.
Jul 7, 2012 -
Re: Dots
"the way he'd moved was sharp, rimmed with slivers of glass." I love the way you described movement as an inanimate object! I can just feel what you mean. You're ...
Jul 7, 2012 -
Re: Mine
Awww...this is absolutely adorwable! :3 I agree with the other reviewers that "mine" does not need to be capitalized...and neither does "everything". But you're really talented.
Jul 7, 2012 -
Re: woman
You're really talented .
Jul 7, 2012 -
Re: When The Moon Will Rise Tonight
verall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
verall I thought this was pretty good, so here's just a couple of things: The first thing is that the first verse, every line starts with "This is goodbye to..." ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Acting Like I Don't Care
Re: Acting Like I Don't Care New postby keekers11 on Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:21 am Very nice lyrics! I can really relate to this because I act like I ...
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: To everyone like me.
Re: To everyone like me. New postby Bhayden71297 on Wed Aug 31, 2011 6:50 am Hey- Wow. W.O.W.That's all I have to say. Just...wow. I don't even know if there's ...
Sep 9, 2011