tammy777

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yeah We are a kind of pen-friend lol!!!

thanks for the review. I have changed the character of mermaids and it's not what goes with the myth. It's just an imaginary poem.

thanks for the review :)

thanks for the review. i will try to to do better next time :)

well it's okay if you don't want to change it or whatsoever. I used 'more' to exaggerate the term 'better'. never mind :)

Thanks i will check it out. But i hardly remember anything . thanks for your suggestion

Thank u so much. I'll work on it. Next try i will come up with something better. Even i wasn't satisfied with this whole mother daughter stuff as i felt ...

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yeah you're so right :)

it's real. i still have the impression of monkey scratch on my left hand.

Thank you so much. Yeah i realized my silly grammatical mistakes . Thank u

lol yeah the moment i saw the name of Belle it reminded me of the movie and i could relate this poem with that movie

Remind me of my grandparent. Cool piece of writing. Old years !!! Short and sweet. God bless you!!!