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Re: The struggle of a loving mother.
Hi Your writing was fair enough but i believe that both the parent are individually responsible for child as family doesn't involve only mother and children but also a father. ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: what I Am
Hi Short and cute piece of poem. Though i feel that the words used here could have been more matured to reveal the pain and dejection also at the same ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: Synonyms
Hi LOL!!! When i first read the whole poem i was amused to see this piece of art. It's a fun to see that you explained your friendship in just ...
Sep 14, 2016 -
Re: The Name for Fear
Hi The way you've written made me feel speechless as it's too short to understand what you actually meant by the whole thing. Short words but a lot to speak. ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Caged songs
Nice poetry. Honest and brutal stories of birds. Birds are free in nature and should never be kept caged. Great writing. This poetry is dedicated to all the birds who ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: Pi
I appreciate your writing and the romanticism it involved. It made me feel something quite inexplicable. Being a student of Philosophy I totally agree with the three laws of universe ...
Aug 8, 2016 -
Re: Through my eyes...
Love the way the bird escaped. When i started reading I felt like I was the bird who is in terrible danger. Your writing gave me an awesome 3D experience. ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Hallways
Great writing. Keep it up. An air of love can be smelt. But the story is too short. I felt that it could have been little more. Specially if the ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Dragons
A great piece of artistic design of words. I appeciate the concep and art. You can be a good publisher who not only care about thoughts but also the style ...
Aug 5, 2016
