sylrie

I would like to start by saying that this has the beginnings of something good. In fact, I feel as though I recognize the type of writing this is; not ...

This is an excellent poem! It has good rhythm, and good rhyme, and those together are often difficult for writers of poetry to manage; it's something I've seen many, as ...

First, some of the problems I see. You seem to have fallen victim to something a lot of writers have trouble with; that is, the narrater description. In your case, ...

Honestly? This is an extraordinary poem! You really did good when it came to sticking to this one tone and running with it (from what I could tell, it was ...

Wonderful beginning! The prologue section manages to achieve its purpose beautifully; it catches the reader's attention, gives the reader just enough details to let us know what's going on, but ...

A weird story is a good story indeed! I'm usually more hesitant when it comes to reading stories where the writer tries to be weird on purpose, as more times ...

What a wonderful piece of reading to come back from break and read! While last time we got to learn more about Andrea and Maria, this time we learn more ...

I must admit I was waiting a while for this part to come out. And you did not disappoint! There was one noticeable typo (Right at the beginning, "Andrea gets ...

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I must admit I was waiting a while for this part to come out. And you did not disappoint! There was one noticeable typo (Right at the beginning, "Andrea gets ...

This struck me harder than I expected. To be honest, I was reading this in a state of misery, but I found that I ended up placing myself in multiple ...

Once more, extraordinary! I was anticipating Andrea succeeding (this wouldn't be a story if she failed, after all), but the events after she succeeded are very telling. Maria seems to ...

I enjoyed every second of reading this. Truly, I did. The rhetorical decision to put this in a play format made it unique, setting it apart from others that might ...

Absolutely beautiful! I love how it is divided, and how it all comes back to "What will you do?" The imagery was great, and I could definitely feel the love ...

Beautifully written piece. The title prepares the reader for a sadder piece, before suddenly disaster strikes. The only question I can think of is concerning the choice of metaphors. Comparing ...