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  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Mystery to Address

    Cher has arrived to write a review ✨ I like how the poem is about letting go. Letting go and knowing the truth is a huge relief on anyone's shoulders. ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Part of the Painting

    Hello, I'm Cher here to review your poem :) First off, a wave of emotions! I know how this feels and it sucks, it really does. You do oa great ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical Re: The Flame of Desire

    This is a well-written poem!!! I would not have enough confidence to submit my poetry for homework 😭. Anyways, let's get into the actual review: I believe this poem is ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: mr. crazy villain villain

    I really enjoyed this poem! I like how it conveys emotions with only a few words such as "thrill" and "triumphant". I feel as if the poem focuses on the ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Shrine

    At first, I almost thought this was going to be satire. (It wasn't.) It was very emotional and dark, considering it is about a box. The emotions are joyous in ...

    May 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Humor, Horror Re: Exam Day

    I loved this so much. Time to answer the problems!! 8. The answer is obviously an octave. 9. The answer is an allusion. 10. B, C, D, E. 11. A ...

    May 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Calamity and Her Whims, Chapter 1

    Hiiii!! It's Cher to write a review! Off the bat, I like how descriptive it is without being too descriptive(does that make sense?) Especially when It comes to describing the ...

    May 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Everything into Nothing

    This is really good! I enjoyed how straightforward it was while showing emotion. It is truly amazing how much emotion was in this. Here's a breakdown of how I felt ...

    Apr 21, 2023
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Blood drive

    This story was very well written! It kept me at the edge of my seat(literally). It built up anxiety and then ended without something to relieve that anxiety so it ...

    Apr 19, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Expecto Patronum

    As a Harry Potter fan, I love this so much!! I can understand the hurt and loss of a loved one as Harry can. He loved Sirius a lot and ...

    Apr 19, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fanfiction Re: Millions of years after the fall of Camelot at the hands of Morgana

    (I have read what came before this) WOW. This is really interesting so far! I am hooked. I also enjoy how this takes place in a place where most people ...

    Apr 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: Have a Good Clucking Day

    This is the first thing I read from this genre. I laughed the entire time because in my head I could hear it as a rap. I like how "clucking" ...

    Apr 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Responsibility

    I enjoyed this poem a lot! I like how it explains the pains of leadership and when everyone is given a decision and they turn to a leader and get ...

    Apr 16, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Purple Stones - Prologue

    Okay so for the first impression of this, I am IMPRESSED. The word choices and the careful precision was keeping me hooked. This is very good writing and I'm excited ...

    Apr 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Denial

    This is a very relatable poem! I really liked the lines: "How could I question them? When they were Older And must be wiser" This often happens with children; they ...

    Apr 13, 2023


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