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This is a very relatable poem! I really liked the lines:
"How could I question them?
When they were
Older
And must be wiser"
This often happens with children; they are told the wrong things and wholeheartedly believe it because they respect their elders. Sometimes they are told to judge another race or someone who likes the same sex. Or even someone who can't find themselves finding anyone attractive. I feel like if more adults took the time to understand that their kids won't be like them all the time and that it's okay to be accepting of people regardless of race, gender, sexuality, etc. Keep up the good work!
- Cher
Thanks a bunch
You're welcome!
Howdy hey! Gengar here to give a review!
This poem is about someone growing up in an anti-LGBTQ+ household who is LGBTQ+ themself, but has been in denial about it because of how their family had been manipulating them.
I liked how you were able to show emotion and get your message across! I also like how you emphasized and personified words by capitalizing them, such as “Denial,” “Box,” and “Truth”
There is one mistake: a typo here:
I wish you a wonderful day!
—GengarIsBestBoy
Thank you so much!