Young Writers Society

Hello, I'm Cher here to review your poem

First off, a wave of emotions! I know how this feels and it sucks, it really does. You do oa great job of expressing the fact that it is hard to meet everyone's expectations.

Secondly, this is constructive criticism, you did spell fulfill incorrectly. Although it's a mistake can always be fixed.

Lastly, I would like to mention that I like that your lines are too long, although, again constructive criticism, you should break it up into stanzas.

Keep up the good work!

- Cher

Failure is a huge problem and weakness of many people. He knows such a situation only by encountering such a situation. You have explained it best.

Failure is a huge problem and weakness of many people. He knows such a situation only by encountering such a situation. You have explained it best.

this is so beautiful <3

I can feel the anxiety throughout this piece. "I can feel the eyes scratching at my skin" is such an eloquent way to describe the feeling of judging stares. And trying to convince yourself of the happy little accidents born from mistakes is something that resonates with me. Keep it up!

Hi! I'm new to this site so bear with me lol. I really love this poem, I've struggled with anxiety and a massive fear of failure myself and this is one of the few pieces I've ever felt has captured how it feels for me. the way you show the defeat and exhaustion is so accurate and wonderfully done, the expectations and the having to defend yourself. the imagining how it feels, the way you describe the physical feelings at the start is lovely. the last two lines are my favorite part, making the failures part of the painting, it's amazing. This is writing I wish I could do, honestly, it's brilliant.