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stygianmoon17

stygianmoon17

  • Poetry » Theatre, Dramatic Re: Ashes

    Hey there, stygianmoon here for a review :P ✅✅✅ PLUSES ✅✅✅ The way you write is just amazing, it's flowing, it's simple and yet effective- with a strong message behind. ...

    Jan 6, 2021
  • Other » Humor, Review Re: Game Of Thrones Season 8 (Selected Rantings From My Notebook Written Immediately After Watching)

    Oof Umm reading this was painful. Not because it was terribly written or anything but omg.. I am of those who read the books but didn't watch the shows and ...

    Jan 6, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Shipwreck

    Hey there, here for a review 🔥 To structure out my review in a more, well, structured way, I'm going to be writing it in three paragraphs. The first are ...

    Jan 5, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: things

    hey, before I start reviewing I just wanted you to know there's people out there for you, and if you ever need someone to listen, I'll always be there :) ...

    Dec 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Endangered - Prologue

    Hey there, stygianmoon, here for a review :3 So let's start right away, Up first, in your very "writer's comment" or whatever it's called, you say it's inspired from George ...

    Dec 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: even i don't trust me

    Hey there, stygianmoon for a review

    Dec 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Dust-mote Impressions (or the Futility of Big Stories)

    Not gonna lie, when I clicked on this poem I wasn't expecting this at all. And then when I started reading I thought this was some cringe essay plan or ...

    Dec 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Not That Funny

    I loooved this poem !! there's just such a unique style to it. So lets begin with the review :p The structure is really interesting, I can't even fathom how ...

    Dec 16, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Dark or Light

    Hey there, hope you’re having a wonderful day, (or night) ! I’ll try not using “ as much since, well, it looks like someone hacked my text when I do ...

    Dec 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: Story Untold

    Hey there, hope you're having a good day, or night, in quarantine ! I just love how the first line instantly pulls you in. It's brusque, it's to the point, ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: I Don't Like To Cuss

    Hey there, hope you are having a nice evening (or day) ! Frankly, this poem has a nice structure to it, and the rhymes flow quite well There's just one ...

    Dec 6, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Drawn (2)

    Hi, hope you're having a lovely night (or day), This short was awesome ! The relationship between these characters is very interesting and I can't wait to see how it ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: What the future holds

    Hi, hope you're having a great day ! or night) About your first sentence, yes ! a thousand times yes ! definitely continue your story ! I won't be acting ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Tanka I wrote for my girlfriend

    Hi there, hope ur having a wonderful day, or night, or evening ! This tanka is really beautiful, the word choice is stunning and really help emphasise on her star-like ...

    Dec 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Prologue-Marry-Anne

    Hi there, I hope you're having a great day (or night) I just wanted to say, I'm so impressed that you've made it to the prologue ! I've written short ...

    Nov 29, 2020


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