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Awh, thank you lovelies (:

other than a few errors here and there this is really good! (:

other than the grammatical errors, this is really beautifully written! great job!

DUDE! i love this! the flow and the imagry is great! It kept me reading, which is good. It was also beautifully written! (:

dude i love it. its beautiful (: I love the emotion in it and the flow of the poem is really good great job!

Thanks guys! (:

Thanks guys I will definatly take the advice you all have given me (:

wow! dude! i love it (: i think this is my new favourate of yours :D its really great and the emotion behind it shows strongly. great job (:

thanks for the reviews :) this was just a random scribbled draft so i will definatly take the advice and work on it more :)

my formatting was actually like that i dunno what happened when i pasted it on the site :/ anyways thanks for reviewing :)

thanks :) well it is actually what the muslims do to the dead. and there is a myth behind it that i havent quite linked in which is why i ...

Oh Wow, this story is incredible. I love the language and structure used in this short-story and the creativity! great job! :)

I am actually going to extend this but have no time because i have HSC going on at the moment haha

I really enjoyed this poem. you managed to potray the emotion really well great job :)

Oh wow I really love this! The flow of this letter is great and how you created a significant voice for the character only through a letter great job!