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Re: Monster
All right., Since you're alone in the Script section, here for a quickie., :D Nothing much to review though., you did a great job., :) But it bothered me how ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Our Call..!
Hi Shivam., :) Steward here for a review., I usually just read and point out stuff in order of the story., Please note that everything I say are just my ...
Apr 27, 2014 -
Re: Don't Trust the Damsels
Hiya Caylleen., :) Here to review ya., :D Not like I would really attack him. That would just ruin my image. Not sure if this is right., but I'll let ...
Apr 24, 2014 -
Re: The animals we are
Heyahey., :D So I'ma read cuz' it's what I like doing., ;) Don't take my opinions seriously, cuz' they're from me., xD First, Wondering why this is our lives Grammar ...
Mar 23, 2014 -
Re: His Legacy - Chapter 1
Hiya Faithless., It's me again., :D Here for chapter 2 of His Legacy (obviously)., Don't take my review seriously, I'm just thinking out loud., xD So first, We ambled along, ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Hunger Games Fanfic: Odesta short story
Hiya, this just got my attention., :) I love the hunger games.!, :D I'll go ahead and read., ;) ...enough to have we feet caressed by the waves every second. ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: Dreams
Okay, so I'll read., :P Schools should shift from a nine month school year to year-round schooling Okay, so you're the kind of guy who loves school, huh? Haha., :) ...
Mar 10, 2014 -
Re: Weeping Angels
Hiya, here to read., :) I suck, you rock, we'll get through with luck., :D Okay, so here's the cheese, I read and tell you what I feel while reading., ...
Mar 10, 2014 -
Re: Fear/Blue Eyes
Hiya, Steward here to read your awesome piece of work., :D I suck, you rock, we'll get through with just pure luck., I'll just read and tell you what I ...
Mar 9, 2014 -
Re: Oblivious Heart
Ok, here is me., :D I'll just go ahead and read while picking up typos., :) That old hag is trying to exert her vengeance on be because she hit ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. I
Hiya., :) Steward hear to speak, (not point out you errors, seeing someone already did that)., As I read this, some stuff bothered me., :) "Let's hope I can get ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Beware of the Malaceth.
So, hey., :) Good work on this poem., reminded me of Skyrim., :D Like Sunshine101 said though, awkward moment on 'grips his pointed teeth'., Rhiasofia also pointed out them obvious ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: what doesn't kill you
Hiya, so first work on YWS, right? Okaaay., So not much to say here, but... Uhm, the story was great., :) but the thing is that it's pretty hard to ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Taking Back The Strip
Okay, I'm here for obvious errors, cause I suck at digging in., :) “Legate, You asked for me?” So, the capital letter 'Y' on 'You'., :) The Legate stood in ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: A Blind Affair
Ok, so here I stumbled from nowhere., :) As I was reading, my eyes were stuck to some obvious mistakes: Alice: Oh! What happen? Are you all right? It should ...
Mar 6, 2014
