stephndek

thank you KayKay..i'm glad you're having fun..keep it up..

that's not completely insane, Its just your unique way of expressing deep, i normally use many periods....i get it. Cool! That title sounds interesting..

I read this poem about climbing a mountain, it had such a form..this poem tells an intense situation so easily and in an effortless way. It's also easy to relate ...

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hi there, nice piece of work there. i like that you left out the punctuation in spots because this is supposed to be like an experience that somebody tries to ...

hi there, nice piece of work there. i like that you left out the punctuation in spots because this is supposed to be like an experience that somebody tries to ...

thanks for the review, I'm glad you can enjoy this.

lesser commas and shorter lines, i get you. But my stanzas i dunno where they are, I should have put periods or something. Hey YWS!?

Diction and metaphors, i think I've heard that request before...yeah thanks. I will keep that in mind.

Yeah do keep trying, until the end if possible....

yeah. a lot..i think i like YWSing.

Great, thanks! I posted this poem a bit too soon,before i worked on it. There's a link between description,title,persona and ideas, i can show that..i'm giving the poem some more ...

wow, thanks for reviewing.yeah, latter is the right word..good of you to notice.

when i say .....!/? i mean think about that for a moment, the exclamation mark is to say that i find that curious or interesting or significant or....(as in you ...

you put on a look-alike and still get a frozen toe? Indeed that is cheating!poor cheating? i dunno.. i didnt know much about the Villanelle form;thanks for the introduction.

this is challenging!! one reading isn't enough..eh!