stayingstrong

This is pretty good but it could use a little more imagery in it. I did enjoy the last 3 lines though. Keep up with the writing!!

This was really great, I really enjoyed the ending. I have just one piece of advice for you: The dialouge seems kind of forced, try to make it more natural. ...

I think its pretty good, your better at poetry than me! Hahahaha but I don't really write poetry. But keep it up!!

I really liked it but here's a bit of advice: 1.) Who is he? Explain more about him because right now I have no feelings for him. 2.) What happened ...

One word-FLAWLESS. I mean the imagery makes me speechless. There is nothing I can say to make it better. Like I said before its FLAWLESS.

I love the plot and the characters! They are really great!! I would love to hear more story's from you!!!

Really great and intriguing, I would love to hear more!

It was good........... Just not the type of stuff I read though I know others would enjoy it. keep up the writing!!

Loved it!! Just would like a bit more information about why shes running for her life. Otherwise AWESOME!!!!!!!

Lovely short story, I feel the pain of the character. I can give nothing to you to make it better! Its perfect!!

Really great but after reading I was lost not sure about a lot of things. It was very interesting and original and thought provoking. Just make it a little clearer ...