starlitmind

Hey! I really like this poem, and like others have mentioned below, the simplicity of the poem is what makes it really beautiful. It is true that there is beauty ...

Hey! This is quite a beautiful poem. I can feel the almost desperation of the speaker and the wanting of help but not receiving it. This is a very lovely ...

Wow, this was a really nice poem! You can feel the desperation of the speaker and the pain they are experiencing. It was a really nice poem, and you did ...

Hey! I really like your story. The plot is intriguing, and I like how something unexpected happened at the end (Endric returning). You have good word usage. I like your ...

Hey! I really like this poem :) You use a lot of repetition, which I think you used nicely overall, like in the lines "look at the sky and feel.../ ...

I love this poem! :) It's beautiful, and the reader can feel the strong will of the girl throughout the poem. I enjoyed your use slant rhymes and putting the ...

This poem truly shows that "there is beauty in simplicity." I love your imagery and word choice, like "scattering amber." I also like the repetition of streetlights in "the cities ...

This is a really beautiful poem! You had an idea and made it tangible and visible. My favorite lines were the first eight. You mentioned in your description that this ...

Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! You convey a hard truth in the poem that isn't always easy to see. I love your imagery and phrases, like "forbidden wave ...

Aw, this is full of emotion and feels painful. My favourite part was "I already feel as if I am on every drug in the universe, and I am so ...

This was really beautiful! The first three lines caught my interest, and it never waned. I loved your imagery :) I have a suggestion. Throughout the poem, when you repeated ...

Hey :) this is my first review, so this may be awkward, haha. I really loved this! I personally liked how the last line of the stanza cut off, and ...