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Re: Chapter 3 - The Gates
HEYA FRIEND, I'M BACK!! ^_^ There were engravings of skulls in the volcanic rock they were constructed of, carving a mural of death. "mural of death" is such a chilling ...
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Re: Chapter 2 - The Meeting
HELLO FRIEND, I'M BACK FOR CHAPTER TWO! .> please don't kill my favourite characters though :'(( Aha xD but I really am looking forward to the next chapter! c: This ...
May 16, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy
HELLO THERE! ^_^ I saw the third chapter of this novel was in the green room, and I wanted to review it, so I decided to start from chapter one ...
May 15, 2021 -
Re: An undead phobia
Hey there! c: I really love your short stories, so I thought I'd check this one out! ^_^ The title sounds super interesting, and I can't wait to see what ...
May 14, 2021 -
Re: The last letter...
HELLO this looks really cool, so I just had to check it out! c: The girl sighed and stared at the blank piece of paper sitting on her desk. This ...
May 12, 2021 -
Re: Helpless Glows
Hey there friend! ^_^ I really enjoyed your other piece of writing, so I hope you don't mind me checking this one out! it's not a big deal, but personally, ...
May 12, 2021 -
Re: Awakening Chapter 5: Faint
AHHHH NEW CHAPTER :) Some light shone in through the living room windows, but within the hour that light faded. I like how the light fading away contributes to the ...
May 10, 2021 -
Re: The Glass Coffin
Ooh, this looks like a super neat story, and I'd love to check it out! ^_^ I remember reading your other story and enjoying it very much, so that makes ...
May 9, 2021 -
Re: A Visit to the Cemetery
Hey there! I saw this piece in the literary section, and I'd love to check it out. It sounds like it's going to be sad, and I love reading sad ...
May 9, 2021 -
Re: Gone
Hey there, I saw this piece in the literary section, and I would love to leave a review for you, if you don't mind! ^_^ I crouched down and placed ...
May 7, 2021 -
Re: Darkness Falls
Hello there! ^_^ This looks like such an interesting story, so I thought I'd stop by and leave a review, if you don't mind! c: she wished she had remembered ...
May 6, 2021 -
Re: Enemies in Crime. Chapter two 4.4
HIYA LADY! omg Soren is in this chapter asdfhj I'm excited haha The worst part about the dirt road that lead to the city. Was the number of potholes that ...
May 5, 2021 -
Re: Enemies in crime. Chapter Three 1.4
HELLO FRIEND I wanted to go back a bit and read and review this chapter as well .> “Nah, I did Instagram it tho, it was too cool to not ...
May 5, 2021 -
Re: Enemies in crime. Chapter Three 2.4
HEY FRIEND! like you don't have to tell every little action Zillah does to accomplish a larger task. I think cutting out some of those details would help with the ...
May 4, 2021 -
Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Ch. 8.2
HELLO MY LOVELY FRIEND, I AM EXCITED this could also give you the chance to explore some more descriptions / weather-related things, if you'd like! "Then I, Shorestar, leader of ...
May 2, 2021
