starlitmind

Hey there! This is quite an interesting poem. Your title is intriguing, and your capitalization of "Dark Room" caught my attention. I have a few suggestions, that of course, you ...

Hey there! This is a poem full of emotion, and you can feel the heaviness the speaker feels. I really enjoyed reading it! I agree with Tenyo, I liked the ...

Hey there! This is a very interesting poem, as you personified death and made it seem almost like a person. I really enjoyed reading it! I do have a few ...

Hey there! This is a beautiful poem, and I wasn't expecting it from the title, which was a pleasant surprise. It portrays emotions beautifully, and really engages the reader. Good ...

Hey there! This poem sounds very relatable, which is nice! Readers get more invested into works that they can relate to. There are some things I'd like to point out. ...

Hey there! I love your poem and your unique phrases. My favorite lines are "Moving serpentine-like, setting ablaze/ The entire witty core of a poet's soul." I also love the ...

Hello! I love nature poetry, and I enjoyed reading yours! I think you chose a pretty subject, and this was a nice read. I have two comma suggestions. I know ...

Wow. This story is absolutely amazing! Your imagery is beyond wonderful. I agree with Tawsif; it's one of the best stories I've read, especially because of your beautiful imagery. Good ...

Hey there! I've read many of your poems, and they are all very lovely and creative! The Disney song poem has to be one of my favourites ^^ You did ...

Hey! This is such a beautiful piece! The title is enticing, and it instantly drew me in. You did a wonderful job! I do have a few things I'd like ...

Hey there! This was such a beautiful poem! You have some really nice imagery and phrases. One of my favourite lines is "I am undone when the wind scatters petals ...

Hey! This is a really nice piece of poetry, and as mentioned below, one we all can relate to! It's more enjoyable to read a piece of poetry when you ...

Hey! I haven't reviewed in awhile, so I apologize if this isn't very helpful :p I like this chapter! You have nice word choice, such as "dazzling wit with a ...

Hey! I really liked this poem. I enjoyed your clever and funny rhymes, and the light tone brought a smile to my face. I do not want to call it ...

Hey! I haven't read a limerick in a really long time. I thought you did a really nice job! The story was funny, and it kept me intrigued. I really ...