spottedpebble

I miss you, J :'(

Written in a timed beginning of class writing activity for my Creative Writing class in 2023 (I should probably rewrite this and add more to it eventually; after all, it's ...

Oh man, I forgot I published this one! I don't even like this poem, lol

Aw, thank you! I love the way you interpreted my poem! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it and thank you for thanking me for liking it, that made my day. : ' ) Also, that's ...

written January 3rd, 2025

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing so kindly what I posted!

Wow, that review ended up being way longer than I thought it would be! What can I say, this poem really moved me. :)

Wrote this on September 18th, 2024 (I wrote this poem as I was standing outside watching the events described)

Thanks for the review and the advice about the tone! I'll keep that in mind. (also I love the style of your review and all the colors)

I feel this.

Thanks! Your feedback on the punctuation is very helpful, and I will adjust that now. :)

Written 10/5/23. edit 10/17/25: this is a very personal poem—which is why I've never given any context behind what it's about—and I'm not sure why I published it on here ...

Such a clever comparison. Halloween and the Internet.

Thanks, those suggestions are extremely helpful! I've never written a horror story like this before, so I'll keep your suggestions in mind for next time I try to write a ...