MEOW! Hello, friend! My name is Ellie and today I will be reviewing using my very own Black Cat Review Method! It is very similar to the incredible YWS S'more Method but I have Halloween-ified it and made it spooky! My little black cat friend, Vladimir, wants to offer his opinion on your amazing literary piece:
Mystical Witch Hat - What I See, Observe, and Interpret
Right from the start, I really liked the mood of this poem. It feels very simple to me, but in a powerful way. For example, I really liked the layout you use at this part:
Raindrops
Fall
From the
Green tree's
Leaves
To me, the 'falling' layout has this mood that mimics... well.. exactly what the poem says! I like the image that I am able to see in my head, picturing this scene of rain falling from a green tree. I think this is a perfect time to post this type of poem since it is beginning to turn to fall in a lot of places right now, so there is a lot more rain and wind, guiding the leaves as they fall. You even mention later in the poem the "autumn breeze", going along with "the rains light fingers", which gave it an even prettier picture in my head.
Overall, my impression of this poem was a very nice and simple poem about seasons changing. I felt like I could see and feel how it is for me when I go outside on a walk through the forest lovely work!
Vladimir’s Advice - Suggestions for Improvement
The theme feels a bit separated from an individual or emotions. I'd love to hear some more personal thoughts- perhaps why these things are important or how the relate to memories, what do they make you feel? Overall though, I really enjoyed reading through it!
Jack O’Lanterns - My Favourite Parts and Praises
You did a great job at keeping in simple and quick paced. My favorite line was:
Hear the tinkling
Sound from
Water dripping
Off the roof-
Tops and
The gutters
I love how you apply so many sensory details throughout the entire thing. We dont just focus on feelings or descriptions, but we go deeper into what we can hear, being attached to more sensory aspects- fantastic work!
Black Cat Cuddles - Concluding Ideas and Thoughts
Fantastic poem and I am eager to read more soon!
Your friend,
Ellie
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