Your poetic expression beautifully conveys a sense of unity with nature, as you transition between being a bird, fish, and clam. The imagery of soaring, swimming, and the interaction with various elements of the natural world paints a serene and harmonious picture. The poem celebrates the idea of being part of nature, with a sense of belonging and acceptance among the animals, water, and sky. It's a reflective and peaceful piece of writing
Points: 473
Reviews: 7
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