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Re: What would I be without my flaws?
Hi Danitheella! spottedpebble here with a review :D I really enjoyed reading this poem. You have a lovely poetic voice. Each line sounds smooth and almost fluttery when read aloud. ...
Aug 9 -
Re: Girls
Hi NotReallyHuman! spottedpebble here with a review :D First of all, I like the conversational tone this poem takes, like it's inviting the readers to listen to you speak out ...
Jul 13 -
Re: secondhand smoke
Hello, pebble here with a review! What grabs my attention the most about this poem is the way you used smoking as a metaphor for an unhealthy relationship. Just like ...
Jun 10 -
Re: 03.13.26 - saturate
Hi! spottedpebble here using the Lucky Review Template; let's get into it! ☘ 1st Leaf: First Impressions & Initial Thoughts The first thing I notice when reading this poem is ...
Mar 18 -
Re: today i will write something
Okay, wow, I love this work so much. The first time I read through it, I had to sit back for a few minutes to let everything sink in. This ...
Feb 14 -
Re: but what if my soul is good?
I’ve been meaning to review this one for a really long time, and now I’m finally doing it! Yay! initial thoughts and noticings I’ve told you before but I LOVE ...
Jan 26 -
Re: A love that slipped
Hello Alex, Pebble here with a review! Before I start, let me say that the first lines of this poem felt like they were calling to me. They really drew ...
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Re: The Life I Deserve Doesn't Exist
Hi! This is Pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings This ...
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Re: The Loneliness of Pride
Hi! This is Pebble with a review! There’s a lot to unpack here, as this story is full of long, detailed paragraphs listing the character’s thought process when visiting his ...
Oct 25, 2025 -
Re: Just for the Summer Chapter 5
Pebble here with another review! I just read all the other chapters of this story and I'm loving the way you write these characters! They feel like real people, with ...
Oct 25, 2025 -
Re: I exist
Hi, Pebble here with a review of your poem! The brain tells you, you are not real, you feel as though you are not. I appreciate that you published such ...
Oct 25, 2025 -
Re: hazel eyes
It’s October again and I have hazel eyes, so I felt it was time for me to review this poem. It’s very rare that I see anything mentioning hazel eyes, ...
Oct 25, 2025 -
Re: origami butterflies
Hi chem! This is pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings ...
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Re: Dreaming in colour
Hi! This is Pebble with an autumn -themed review for spooky season! (Based on the incredible YWS S'more Method , of course) Crisp Air — initial thoughts and noticings Okay, ...
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Re: crocheting what we could be
Hi! Pebble here with a review! Initial Thoughts Your first line is gorgeous and really got me hooked. I love the way you describe everything, it's so soft and delightful. ...
Jan 3, 2025
