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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: a rose for the abused..

    he setting sun, upon the open field, where we played and laughed, we fought and I cried. I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, smashed in the face with ...

    Oct 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You Never Loved Me.

    Whisper it in my ear. I’m waiting. Tell me the secret I’ve been dying to hear. I watch the earth spin, Creating circles around my head. Not knowing how to ...

    Oct 31, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)

    " He turns back at my cry to see my body dead He rushes back, kneels by my side, and slowly bows his head Tears fall off his face, his ...

    Oct 31, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Destiny

    Destiny Hey sis! sorry I got your message late. But I finally got it and here's my review. hope youll forgive me for being so late. Now this is what ...

    Jun 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: She

    Nobody else compares to you, Absolutely no one. Believe me, I've tried a few. . . . I miss you so much; From your crazy stories To you gentle touch. ...

    May 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why?

    Why ever a sunrise? Why would she have me here? Why the timeless wash of the waves? Why soft sand and a setting sun? Why ambiguity and serenity? Why words ...

    May 22, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Poem for Sarah

    Oh, my darling daughter how lovely you are. I will always be here near and far. Even though I am sad, I am glad to watch you grow. Time moves ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: irony

    when you finally see the words they mean, maybe you'll learn to fit in the box they made. and when you go along with the lines they said thinking too ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spread Your Wings

    "Spread your wings And you can fly. You’ll never know Unless you try. All you need Is the ability to trust. And don’t forget A bit of pixie dust! Close ...

    Mar 3, 2009
  • Script » General, General Re: icarly: iCRASH!

    I dont know what to say actually If you wanted to write a funny play then improve this one cause its kinda confusing. ANd if not then I dont know ...

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: i'm so sorry

    well the idea behind it was nice and brave no doubt but i personally think that rhyming words make a greater impact and with your idea the impact will be ...

    Jul 18, 2008
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: the unknown

    Nce poem. You wrote on the spur of d mometn, i suppose. :) See, i like your poem. the problem is, well, even with the lyrical value the poem kinnda ...

    Jul 3, 2008


When a flower doesn't bloom, you fix the environment in which it grows, not the flower.
— Alexander Den Heijer