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Re: a rose for the abused..
he setting sun, upon the open field, where we played and laughed, we fought and I cried. I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, smashed in the face with ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: You Never Loved Me.
Whisper it in my ear. I’m waiting. Tell me the secret I’ve been dying to hear. I watch the earth spin, Creating circles around my head. Not knowing how to ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)
" He turns back at my cry to see my body dead He rushes back, kneels by my side, and slowly bows his head Tears fall off his face, his ...
Oct 31, 2009 -
Re: Destiny
Destiny Hey sis! sorry I got your message late. But I finally got it and here's my review. hope youll forgive me for being so late. Now this is what ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: She
Nobody else compares to you, Absolutely no one. Believe me, I've tried a few. . . . I miss you so much; From your crazy stories To you gentle touch. ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Why?
Why ever a sunrise? Why would she have me here? Why the timeless wash of the waves? Why soft sand and a setting sun? Why ambiguity and serenity? Why words ...
May 22, 2009 -
Re: Poem for Sarah
Oh, my darling daughter how lovely you are. I will always be here near and far. Even though I am sad, I am glad to watch you grow. Time moves ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: irony
when you finally see the words they mean, maybe you'll learn to fit in the box they made. and when you go along with the lines they said thinking too ...
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Spread Your Wings
"Spread your wings And you can fly. You’ll never know Unless you try. All you need Is the ability to trust. And don’t forget A bit of pixie dust! Close ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: icarly: iCRASH!
I dont know what to say actually If you wanted to write a funny play then improve this one cause its kinda confusing. ANd if not then I dont know ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: i'm so sorry
well the idea behind it was nice and brave no doubt but i personally think that rhyming words make a greater impact and with your idea the impact will be ...
Jul 18, 2008 -
Re: the unknown
Nce poem. You wrote on the spur of d mometn, i suppose. :) See, i like your poem. the problem is, well, even with the lyrical value the poem kinnda ...
Jul 3, 2008
