speakerskat

Ya this comment is for everyone. It is a little confusing and I am awful at spelling sorry! It means that the sky is like our future and sometimes we ...

Thanks I'm speechless!

Thanks, people usually say I am to verbose XD ( read my work wooden spears and you will see what I mean). I get your point, but my writing usually ...

Can I just say again that I just Love this poem, cause I do! Hehehehehe my friends love it !

Thanks! I think I will write the next chapters using the uggestions you made over the summer, then once I finish have someone review the whole story and I will ...

Nice! I can't really say I have a negative comment about this poem! It's cute, short, simple, and yet holds an even greater meaning . Sort of says "follow your ...

Yet another lovely work by lovelysayshi! Keep it up. I really love it . I could feel exactly how the person in the poem is feeling and your rhyming is ...

Ya, I havent written in awhile so I'm a little rusty. Thanks

Aww thanks guys! And I noticed the "to" too I just didn't comment. I will try to write another piece soon and I really hope this story works out as ...

To you is sort of implied, sometimes adding extra words isn't necessary in poetry so I disagree, I suppoe that's up to the author because personally I prefer short and ...

Oh woops! Forgot to capitalize "love" in the title. Please ignore that ! *not a review*! I would love some comments on this piece, I wrote it on the spurr ...

Really long and interesting, I think some of it could have been changed and eloborated more but I still liked it. You really caught the flowers thoughts just as I ...

Love it! However in the stanza "The Willow cried onto the ground soaking her dry roots not only did she grow that day she started something else." I Think it ...

Thank you for the advice, next time i'll try what you said. I have to agree though, now that someone has mentioned it... it is a bit...bland and long. I ...

thanks so much, I'll try to come up with something else soon! :)