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you could just have gone under "edit work " XD

HAHA thanks XD

Oh my gosh thabks MindBlown! I didn't really know what to think at first XD

That mean a lot .. thanks.

I actually made it longer now... this one and the watermellon one

Thanks. Yeah, my spelling is....defficient. (if I spelled that wrong *faceplam*)

Hahaha thanks, I sorta wish the situation in the poem has a happy ending ;p I hope.

Nice but it totally lacked rythem and seemed more like you were just sluring words on paper in my opinion. Though I like your vocabulary it felt slow and starined ...

ah pokemon ;)!

Each stanza is one sentence , it's a form of formatting.I ued the repetition to make up for the lack of rhyming words caue usually I use rhyming words and ...

Haha you used really a lot XD beat you to the review :P

Sure, if I catch any of your work I will definatley check it out

Sure, if I catch any of your work I will definatley check it out

Sure, if I catch any of your work I will definatley check it out

Sure, if I catch any of your work I will definatley check it out