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Re: My friend and the motive
Hi! Sophie here to review! ~ so this is a really good story plot and the beginning is amazing. I liked the details of the house as you are standing ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:56 am -
Re: The Clown
this was such a good story to read even after Halloween because I get scared easily and this sent shivers down my back and after I read this I closed ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 12:32 am -
Re: The Disordered Land
HI! Sophie S. here to review your poem! It was really amazing and I felt it. it gave me shivers when I read the god's wrath part. this poem truly ...
Sat Nov 03, 2018 12:07 am -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
I just want to say that I cried when reading this because it is so true in our society. more people need to know that it is okay to be ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:47 pm -
Re: the sands of time
Hello! Sophie here to review your work! - first stanza-the first line implies a beautiful metaphor. the second line and the third both support this detail. the fourth has a ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:17 pm -
Re: Sally the Silly Siamese
Hello! Sophie here to review! first stanza-amazing rhyme scheme and good story line appealing to young children. This is super easy to read and understand so it will be good ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:08 pm -
Re: Cost Of Daydreaming...
Sophie here to review! first stanza- so descriptive, I can see myself sitting in a chair staring at the board like this student is. the vocabulary is amazing! its so ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:50 pm -
Re: No More Junk Food!
Hello! Sophie here to review! First stanza- so relatable its amazing. I love the rhyme scheme and I can hear the people talking! it makes me feel not alone in ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:45 pm -
Re: His Eyes are Oceans
Hi! Sophie here for a review! this is a really good poem! short and sweet! The description is really good and I can see it all in my head! the ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:40 pm -
Re: You
Hi! Sophie here to review! This is short and sweet! I have a couple things though! maybe could you go more in deep to what you here. Show the disappointment ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:37 pm -
Re: "Little squab a little hope"
Hello! Sophie here to review! I love this poem! it is very well written with great vocabulary and I don't know if I can find something wrong with it! It ...
Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:35 pm
