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  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: My friend and the motive

    Hi! Sophie here to review! ~ so this is a really good story plot and the beginning is amazing. I liked the details of the house as you are standing ...

    Sat Nov 03, 2018 11:56 am
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Clown

    this was such a good story to read even after Halloween because I get scared easily and this sent shivers down my back and after I read this I closed ...

    Sat Nov 03, 2018 12:32 am
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Disordered Land

    HI! Sophie S. here to review your poem! It was really amazing and I felt it. it gave me shivers when I read the god's wrath part. this poem truly ...

    Sat Nov 03, 2018 12:07 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    I just want to say that I cried when reading this because it is so true in our society. more people need to know that it is okay to be ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:47 pm
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: the sands of time

    Hello! Sophie here to review your work! - first stanza-the first line implies a beautiful metaphor. the second line and the third both support this detail. the fourth has a ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:17 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sally the Silly Siamese

    Hello! Sophie here to review! first stanza-amazing rhyme scheme and good story line appealing to young children. This is super easy to read and understand so it will be good ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 8:08 pm
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Cost Of Daydreaming...

    Sophie here to review! first stanza- so descriptive, I can see myself sitting in a chair staring at the board like this student is. the vocabulary is amazing! its so ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:50 pm
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: No More Junk Food!

    Hello! Sophie here to review! First stanza- so relatable its amazing. I love the rhyme scheme and I can hear the people talking! it makes me feel not alone in ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:45 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: His Eyes are Oceans

    Hi! Sophie here for a review! this is a really good poem! short and sweet! The description is really good and I can see it all in my head! the ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:40 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: You

    Hi! Sophie here to review! This is short and sweet! I have a couple things though! maybe could you go more in deep to what you here. Show the disappointment ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:37 pm
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: "Little squab a little hope"

    Hello! Sophie here to review! I love this poem! it is very well written with great vocabulary and I don't know if I can find something wrong with it! It ...

    Fri Nov 02, 2018 7:35 pm


When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides