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yeah, this was really sweet. It made me say 'awwww' and grin appreciatively, so there you go. I liked it. I don't know what melody you're hearing, but I can ...

[pre]Do you have a way you could record the song and post it on myspace or something? I'd love to hear it. This was a great song, and I think ...

Heh heh...I have to admit, on principle, that I liked the first one better. The second one was funny, but... :oops: Maybe you could substitute the f*** word for, like, ...

Mm, nice! A good sentiment, but I was homeschooled, so I got to skip that whole 'popular' nightmare. Yay! The writing flowed very smoothly, overall pretty good. I've seen this ...

Good, good! I liked it...interesting. I take it there must be a reason it's called Never Been Kissed? Is it Fantasy Romance, then? Anyway, I agree with what the others ...

Okay, yeah, I liked this. It's hard to actually critique it, because all the chapters are together, though...I don't have time to actually go through all of them. But it ...

Yes, yes yes!!! So glad you got the next one up! :smt026 Hem...this was great, as usual. :smt023 It really was so good...I couldn't find any errors. Really. I know, ...

Pretty good. I like the idea, but I'm really not much for Vampires. The drama is good, and stuff. I like the first two paragraphs...there were a couple punctuation and ...

Wow, yeah...huge block of text. From what I could actually read, your writing looked very good, but you need to break it up in between paragraphs. Look at other people's ...

Ooooohhh...creepy. Um, I liked this. I didn't catch a whole lot of errors, and since you wrote it in a hurry, it explains the brevity. I think this was a ...

Welcome to the site! Glad to have you with us, and all that. On to the bloody business...*rubs hands and cackles*...of critiquing. Personally, I'm sorry but I didn't really enjoy ...

I actually kind of liked this! That doesn't sound complimentary...sorry. Just know that I don't usually like stuff about were-creatures...something about them turns me off. But this was interesting. M

Whoa. That was a very interesting story! This was very well written, and the end kind of surprised me. In a good way. She was wading through a sea of ...

Awwwwww :smt060 That was sweet. A little too short, I think, though...there's not a lot of time for tension to build. I think you should add a scene where Matt ...

Um, I liked the idea, but I agree with above crits. You did a lot of telling. I also didn't like it how you introduced all of the characters. For ...