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Re: Internal Rest
Well, this piece spoke quite powerfully. I really love a few of your stanzas and overall it is quite interesting to read the way you organized this very detailed piece ...
Tue Sep 18, 2012 3:13 pm -
Re: Behind Your Mirrors
Wow, okay...I am in love with this poem! I have written a poem titles reflection which is such a different take than this piece so I am happy about that. ...
Mon Sep 17, 2012 11:56 pm -
Re: Broken Light Bulbs
Wow, this really spoke to me. I cant get over the lines Your extended hand I shall not hold onto, This fall I shall take, because I have to. So ...
Sat Jul 21, 2012 1:21 pm -
Re: Me
Well, let me just say this is a very uplifting poem! With all the bullying and torment that occurs in the younger generations, it’s always reassuring to read something about ...
Thu Jun 14, 2012 3:17 pm -
Re: To Be a Parent
Aw thanks for the sweet review...you should write a piece based on your parents and I'll review it haha :D Keep Writing ~SnowBerry
Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:21 pm -
Re: Crystal Clear
Thank you so much for the reviews! Sadly, my mother died six years ago, but I didnt write this to make others sad, I did it to show people that ...
Thu Oct 13, 2011 11:37 pm -
Re: The Closest Reason Chapter 4
Aw thank you so much for the helpful tips guys!
Mon Sep 26, 2011 1:33 am -
Re: Scars
Hey, thank you so much for the helpful posts! I just wanted to take a second to say that I have always sucked at the Your/You're thing... Also, SteppinRazor, I ...
Thu Sep 15, 2011 12:51 am -
Re: Could I Ask You For A Favor
Really? What contest? Oh, and thank you for pointing that out, I always miss the little things in my work. :D I am happy you liked the story so much, ...
Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:27 am -
Re: Knowing Me
Aw thanks everyone! The two of you honestly just made my day. I was having a really hard night and sat down and just banged on my keys and "Knowing ...
Wed Aug 17, 2011 1:51 pm -
Re: Between us
Hey! Thank you so much for the reviews! I honestly opened this piece up, thinking, hm...this seems intersting. I forgot that i had even wrote it--so i posted it. Now, ...
Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:46 am -
Re: The Closest Reason (working title) Chapter Two
Hey, thank you so much for taking the time to read my work and correct it! I am a horrible speller as it is...thank god for spell check! Anywho, i ...
Thu Apr 07, 2011 9:46 pm -
Re: What Can I
Okay, I HATE the three line's that are all "What can I/ooo etc. My friend, who helped me right the piano piece while i played it out on guitar told ...
Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:10 pm -
Re: Someone To Fight For
Well, I wanted to post this and have all of you read it before I flat out stated what it's about, but I’m talking about my mom and one of ...
Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:17 am -
Re: Someone To Fight For
Why thank you, i was feeling, I'm not to sure to be honest, I wrote it a while back. I found it the other day, made a few changes and ...
Sat Jan 29, 2011 4:57 pm