Knowing Me

by snowberry23

Published August 16, 2011

In NeverLand

Everyone knows me, but hasn't quite defined me yet.

~Time

Another word for swamp.

~Quagmire

I was originally grounded from stone.

~Lipstick

All three of things are known to me, but the way they can be described without using their actual name makes it difficult to pin point what the sentence is describing. This is the state I feel I am currently in. I am an answer to a riddle of a sentence that no one seems to be able to figure out. I am not misunderstood, I am not invisible and I mostly certainly am not depressed. I cant state it any more simply than this, I am on the tip of everyone I love's tongue.

Imagine those game shows, the ones that require you to know useless information to win, where the spokesman has that plastered smile across his face at all time. You see people jump up and down as they watch "1,000 dollars" worth of cash and prizes flash above their head. Except, I am not a game show, people cant guess what city I am in, in Asia, and win that round. While this all may sound crazy to you, it makes perfect sense in my head.

I would be undefined if humans themselves had a dictionary.

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ally1212 wrote a review Review · Aug 17, 2011

That was pretty amazing. I'm a bit connfused but then again I'm always connfused. I'm not sure what I liked about it I just know that I liked it very much. I'm sort of wondering what made you write something like that? You don't have to awnser my question I'm just wondering. I say good job on that piece of writing and may all your other work be that exellent.

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snowberry23 commented Comment · Aug 17, 2011

Aw thanks everyone! The two of you honestly just made my day. I was having a really hard night and sat down and just banged on my keys and "Knowing Me" appeared in front of me. I didn't think anyone would understand it but it truly means a lot to read these reviews. I am thinking about adding more to it, goo idea or bad?
~SnowBerry

paintingtherain97 wrote a review Review · Aug 16, 2011

This is great!!! It's exactly how I feel a lot of the time, complex and hard for even me to understand. I like this. I think I saw one little grammar error but honestly can't remember what it was, so you might just want to go through and double check stuff. I like the meaning and the wording and how it's all kind of philosophical. The way you describe yourself as the tip of the people you know's tongues was cool. All of your figurative language was great, the metaphors and everything. Anyway, good work and keep it up. I hope that my review helps.

YouWishYouHadThis commented Comment · Aug 16, 2011

This Is Great Keep Doing You



Let yourself be silently drawn by the strange pull of what you really love. It will not lead you astray.
— Rumi