smashles

Hey there! First of all, I would just like to say that this poem is very good. I love the repetition of 'Reverand Jim Jones' and how deep it is. ...

Hey there! :) Okay so this is basically a very good, beautifully written poem, and at this point in time I have only one small piece of criticism for you, ...

Hey, it's Smashles here for a review! Hopefully it will prove helpful to you :) Life is... I don't know Okay, I don't like the "I don't know" part. It's ...

Dear Georgie, I feel bad for not getting around to reviewing this sooner because now I'm not the first person reviewing it and I wanted to be :( Nevertheless, I ...

This story is AMAZING Maddy! I truly love it! Although there were a few things that weren't quite right. Nothing major, just a few little errors. ...his gloved fi st ...

This was an interesting piece, though I've never written a collage poem myself and am not really sure how the structure is supposed to be so I'll just go with ...

Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!! Seriously I was upset when the chapter finished! I just wanted to keep reading it and find out what happened to Cherrie and Scott. ...

This is a really nice piece you've got here. I love how the middle verses rhyme but the first and last don't. It's a very sweet, truthful bit of poetry, ...

Hey there! This is a pretty good piece, but there was one bit that bugged me. That person died of lung cancer It sounds like you're just carelessly saying it. ...

Hi! What's up? There was only one error I found in this and it was obviously accidental. There's so many thing s that I'd like to say Sometimes words are ...

Uh... It was good, I won't deny that, but it was so dark . The only line a actually didn't like was I need somebody with an electrical socket embedded ...

Hey Georgie! This is really, really good. I seriously could not stop reading it. But there are still some mistakes I noticed. They were small wire devices that hung from ...

Hey there! This was a very interesting piece and it was pretty good but there were a few things that put me off. The first thing was that the first ...

Okay I know you showed me this at school but seriously I loved it so much that I just wanted to tell you that I really want to read it ...

This poem really reminded me of something the band 'Evanescence' might sing. The lyrics were very deep and a little bit symbolic. It's very meaningful and I love the way ...