skylnn00writes

Hey! Just here to drop a review :smt001 Just reminding you that these are all just suggestions and you are in no way forced to listen. "He touched the worn ...

Hey! Stopping by to review your work :smt001 Please keep in mind that these are all suggestions and of course as the creator you do not need to listen to ...

"The invaders are closing in day by day and there is not much that we can do about it" said granpa Cho in his old weak voice but looks like ...

Hey! Just going to tell you now that these are all suggestions and things I would do. I am just trying to help you in your writing, but you have ...

The only thing I want to point out is in the beginning move the comma inside the quotation marks for "This," Also, at the end this is just a small ...

Ok so the first paragraph is really good. I really like all your metaphors and comparisons. Except one small thing... I think you can take out some of the comparisons ...

The ending was creepy but I must say that I absolutely love Disney with all my heart and soul and body and everything. Just some small things I want to ...

Wow this is really good. I especially like the ending because I really want to know what his next few days hold. As for the rest of the story, it ...

Hey! Following up on your request: I like the first paragraph. It grabs the attention of the reader. "She did not like the Digis and did not want to be ...

So the first thing I noticed is you switching your person. You go from we to they and I think you should pick one or the other, not switch between ...

I cried. This was just so emotional. The only thing I will point out is when you wrote "Mother and stepfather will doubtless tell you about how often I lied." ...

"She took a deep breath of cold air in," the in seems kind of in an awkward place. Maybe you could take the "in" out since the next sentence explains ...

"As the strongest bonds where cut;" Did you mean to write were cut? I feel like this might fit it better. The deeper metaphorical meaning this song has with life ...

I have never been a fan of writing poetry, and even though I have tried, I have never been able to write actual song lyrics. The fact that you can ...

"Lee announced the class" make sure to add a to in there between announced and the. "It took Lee a moment to try and not laugh at the message the ...