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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Politics Re: Mari Onette

    It took me a moment, but that's pretty good! Ha!

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Politics Re: Mari Onette

    Thanks, Fortis! Another definition for calculus, by the way: a concretion of minerals formed within the body, especially in the kidney or gallbladder.

    Aug 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Film Re: It came down to Star Wars, in the end.

    Well, the scene is where your famous quotation comes from. It's hard to think of this as not being purposefully connected to it. (I wasn't specifically talking about the stanza ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Taxi in Kampala

    Turbid != torpid. I learned something. The imagery in this is vivid and beautiful. I cannot produce meaningful suggestions for improvement - which is a real rarity for me. Why, ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: everything i touch, like cracks in a screen

    * soliloquies. I was wondering if this would have to do with cell phones - and of course, it does. At first I read the title: "everything I touch, cracks ...

    Aug 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Literature, Dramatic Re: Short stories unpublished

    Hey, I was going to say those things. ;)

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 21

    After much ado about tents and supplies, rumors and sheep-sitters, Jay, Shep, and the trolls started up the mountain. The trek was long, painful, tedious, and boring. A description of ...

    Aug 18, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water Lily in the Wind

    Also see Unicode Character 'RIGHT SINGLE QUOTATION MARK' (U 2019)

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water Lily in the Wind

    u2019 = "magic quote" = %u2019 It's called Unicode , and the u xxxx numbers/letters are a way for computers to turn symbols and letters into a format they can ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: Erm. Poerm.

    To all those things: yes, it is.

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Water Lily in the Wind

    What a consternating title for a poem about a hawk which finds a frog attractive. I approve. (Especially so if I just got that wrong, in which case, you are ...

    Aug 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 20

    I'm glad you found the review helpful. I do have another mistake (of my own) to point out, though: I seem to have imagined the bit about Jay standing up ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Want To Know Too

    "Red and pretty" doesn't make sense to you? And how she was "painting the floor"? the woman is laying in a pool of blood.

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Change?

    You just happened to be my 75th review, which deserved a celebration. So, we're sharing the confetti party at the end. :) (But we can't share my third star. That's ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: See you

    Aww... Thanks. Glad to be of help.

    Aug 10, 2014


What will live longer, you or your words? Something to think about the next time you abandon a project...
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