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You made a lot of conscious decisions in this poem (as I've seen from your comments below), and I'll try to keep those in mind. Take with salt; mind the ...

Oh my goodness this was posted in July. Travesty, that. Here, has a review. Take with salt; mind the edges. Deanie's pretty picky, but I've still got some fresh spins. ...

Study of righteous wrath. I'm going to keep that in mind. Take with salt; mind the edges. a soul is a violent and demanding core of gravity Diction. What is ...

I read a line, and do not like it; then I read it again, and find it beautiful. Terribly odd. Take with salt; mind the edges. I should preface this ...

The mountains loomed like giants, showing snow-topped peaks by the morning sun. "Showing" is boring. "Revealing?" "Topped by?" "Crested by?" Try something more descriptive. The town they had stopped i

My God; it's full of blood. I sincerely enjoyed this. I hate reviews that say: "Oh, Wow. This is just too good . Gee, I wish I could write this." ...

It's very straightforward, which is not at all unwelcome. Take with salt; mind the edges. Procrastination is a condemnation "a condemnation"? Among many? The particle here, "a," floats purposelessly a

Take with salt; mind the edges. I have a handful of comments. I want to be enough to make you forget the others, Awk. "The others" is weak wording. I ...

As I promised, I'll be filling in for whoever it was that stiffed you the review you were meant to receive from the Poetry Exchange Club. (I'm sure they didn't ...

Now, I come here under the auspices of the Poetry Exchange Club. I truly want to provide a good review of your poem - especially since I believe you are ...

A-ha-ha! You taught me a word. What mendacity must this virtuous clause betray me?! Alas - the Princeton Web Dictionary assures me - abstrusity is indeed a word. And, in ...

I like this. Take with salt; mind the edges. Géneral Commentarts : 1st Stanza : Compared to the rest of the work (though there's not a lot for comparison, all ...

Let's see... Take with salt; mind the edges. General Commentary : 1st Stanza : All I truly notice is a distinct lack of subtlety. I've said in reviews before, with ...

Mmmmh... I have mixed feelings, after reading this. I haven't done a review in some time, but I think I remember how I usually start these. :) Take with salt; ...

It's bizarre that you chose to express impatience (& perhaps other temporal frustrations) in such a complex way. Intriguing, of course, and certainly Seussical. I wouldn't agree it "has nothing ...