singhvaibhav

Hey Radrook, This poem touches upon a very simple topic recognition, acknowledgment these things are often taken for granted, but surely you know the value of a few words of ...

hey Casanova, a Really interesting name by the way, about your poem. Its a really sad topic that you have explored through your words here the death of a younger ...

Hey Catalyn, I loved your poem. It has a certain ring to it a certain tone that just strikes you when you start reading it and then draws you in ...

hey Flumadiddle, I really like your poem here it has a nice rhythm to it. I am not sure if I grabbed the meaning correctly but I will give it ...

Hey woahhitherepal, I really like your poem here. It exudes the pain that almost everyone goes through nowadays. For me, this poem is about covering up and trying to efface ...

Hey noelani2004, In my view this poem is about an individual trying to commit suicide, and failing at it, but it's not just about that is it? this feeling of ...

Hey VegasLights, I really like your poem here. It's about happiness of all things and dare I say reading this made me very happy. I have a few suggestions 1. ...

Hey LizzieH3, your poem here is a mixture of very intense and relatable lines and some lines that could be removed, I really like these lines " Feeling and knowing", ...

Hello popsicles, BrEe, I really like your poem here it seems spontaneous and natural and of course unpretentious. The poem has a nice flow to it, nice rhyming scheme. That ...

Hello godlypopo, I really like your poem here, it is heart touching and simple to read and understand that being said I just have a few suggestions. 1. The rhyming ...

Hey Nike, I really liked the way your story started here, although I would have to say I have seen a lot of movies and stories start this way, but ...

Hey ashpandas, I am gonna start with the title, the title is quite captivating, it draws the reader towards your story, which is what every writer hopes for so kudos ...

Hello VegasLights, This is a good and easy read, I would say it is too simple, but it is true to itself and you don't pretend to dress it up ...

Hello woahhitherepal, I really like your piece here it is terse and speaks volumes within these 5 lines, I just have a few suggestions 1. maybe you could try creating ...

Hello santana, this is a fine piece but I have a few suggestions. this poem is very simple and true to itself there is no pretension in it, it kind ...