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silvermoon17

silvermoon17

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Until then

    I must admit this poem is not the clearest of them. You%u2019ve got that one right. I guess my thoughts really are all over the place, but the %u201Cconclusion%u201D you ...

    Sep 19, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: how to lose a life

    Sujit.. You are not helping anyone by criticizing this poem. You are just destroying the writer even more with your own negativeness.

    Aug 27, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    Thanks a lot for the review! And no. My poem is not about *pants* There is a style you use when reviewing/ when you reviewed my poem that is kinda ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    I%u2019m happy you enjoyed it, %uD83E%uDD17 it%u2019s amazing how you got the impression I was trying to show in the poem just like that. Your review is really heartwarming. Really.

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Ache

    Your comment was harsher than you meant it to be

    Jul 31, 2019
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: A Bandit's Fortune

    I think you missed my point when I talked about the %u201Cvibrant description%u201D, I was not saying your poem lacked that, but I mean- there%u2019s poems only about description with ...

    Jul 31, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    ;)

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    XDDD

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    For some funny reason I have no idea what my poem is about except for the title. Thanks, now I know!

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    Thanks for the review, just wanted to point out that the whole idea behind %u201Cit grinds its claws on stone as on silence; it feasts%u201D is meant to represent, well ...

    Jul 30, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Holes

    Thanks a lot for this review, even though my reply probably doesn%u2019t mean much to you; your review is really touching. Again, if I somehow I was rude to you ...

    Jul 29, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ruiner

    "Finally, I%u2019d go for pride." Yay i guessed it right! At least you realized pride is two sided, nice to explain it tho

    Jul 25, 2019
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Those Red Eyes

    You could literally make a part 2

    Jul 24, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: if only you weren't so afraid to fly

    True ^^

    Jul 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 4

    It%u2019s from game of thrones. Viserion is the name of one of the main characters dragons. That%u2019s why I said GOT. (For Game Of Thrones.) Phew the way you ended ...

    Jul 24, 2019


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