Hello, FlamingPhoenix here with a short review for you on this lovely night, and to help get your work out the green room.
Okay let's begin.
A Bandit's Fortune what an interesting name, I haven't seen anything like it before, so this got my attention right away, and I knew I had to come read your poem.
And boy was it amazing, the deep emotion was amazing, it got to me so well, I could feel everything that needed to be felt, I think you did an amazing job telling this wonderful story in a poem form, it's short, but the point and the emotions come across really well, making the poem a lot more enjoyable.
I love that this poem was long, it aloud me to stay in the little world you created a little longer than other poems. I thought the descriptive words you chose to use were a great touch to the whole thing. It made me feel even more like I was apart of your poem, it was so cool.
Your punctuation made the flow of the poem just right, there were no hiccups the flow was perfect. That also goes for your spelling, that to was brilliant.
Well that's all from me for now, I'm glad I go to be one of the lucky people to read and review this poem, I'm sure I will be back ti give it another read sometime, it's just that good. I hope you will keep writing amazing things like this, because if you keep it up you can get your poems published one day. Anyway keep writing and have a great day or night.
Your friend
FlamingPhoenix!
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