silvermoon17

I know it’s been some time since then came out.. but I’m here anyways, so let’s begin for the review. My first impression on your poem was, of course, the ...

just thought i'd come drop a review to help this out of the green room. I really like how you end with a nice rhyme- even though it might have ...

Hello casa! I just thought I’d drop a review.. I dunno why really.. So if you’ve not already noticed my style, I basically review stanza per stanza just as I ...

This was so deep I can’t find my words for this review. First though, I’d like to tell you something; and that is that not everyone is “them” not everyone ...

I like the irregular way of display of all your ideas- the wya you pass from life to breathing to your chest holding still. You really keep us hooked from ...

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Hello coffeeism (whatever that means..); here for a review. So first of all, I appreciate the fact you’re vague at the beginning.. but maybe it would have been even nicer ...

(The Dark is quite)? Wut? I hope you meant that the dark is QUIET tsk tsk. Anyways, the rest of the poem is cool. The background fascinates me (even though ...

Heyaaa Here for a review.. Anyways. I really like the style and all.. it gives this distorted feeling of a place so close to our reality.. but watch out, since ...

I just hope you are a woman otherwise i might drown in my utter shock of all the sexism in this poem- anyways.. okay, i take back what i said- ...

this poem was probably made more out of boredom, so you basically described the first thing coming on your mind. I think it is called subconscious writing, but i am ...

the first time you read this poem, admit it; you are rather taken aback. not a bad thing really. i think the small style of your letters give this nice ...

i like how we never get what you are talking about, i mean, we get you're talking about bleach-but then we start thinking you made an ExTeNdEd MeTaPhOr. even though ...

The vague words give us this polarity you try to express throughout this poem- but sometimes, things are auto vague. A poem is not supposed to have a fixed idea ...

I was hoping to prove wrong all other reviewers on how your message was unclear.. but truth is, your whole message is actually a confusing one. I believe this is ...

Heyaa casa! So.. you’re in front of me.. but who cares XD AnYwAyS So for a review.. I really enjoyed the way you used extend metaphor ALL throughout your poem. ...