silvermoon17

The whole idea of making us guess what sin you are talking about is really really interesting. I still just can’t see what does the title stand for. There’s one ...

Your poem has a beautiful extended metaphor of this whole plant and soil thing. The images really depicts the whole idea, and it can even make you think. (I also ...

I must admit this poem could pull on one’s heartstrings. The image is not amazing or memorable really, but it sets the mood- it really does. Starting with the structure, ...

It’s niccce. I just can’t find a motive. You are 13. Okay. Some thirteen years old people still like Harry Potter. Fine. But why her? Why make a Harry Potter ...

The background of your poem is, fortunately, not either too clear or too dark for the letters to be of different color. Another thing I noticed, is your name at ...

So first of all, something quite troubling is that you never describe the Nyx, and never demonstrate any feeling from it. Except maybe (Nyx’s wanting, tainted fingers) and I just ...

Ok hey, here for a review(all that polite sh**) So I really like that opening. You begin with the main point, insecurity. So maybe you could do something like (Insecurity ...

Really, when I first saw your poem, I was kinda scared it’ll be enormous- the length of your poem is a ReLiEf. Back to the outlines of your poem. I ...

I’ll just compliment you on your tagline. I think the effect would’ve been five times better if envision wasn’t a real word. Because of that, people would rather search envision ...

I am basically in the same state of mind of you, I do not believe any disorder (was we call them) is a disease. I have a nice little way ...

What I love about this poem, is how we are at the same time empathetic, and self-pitying. You talk only about yourself and this ghost, (which I guess is an ...

Wow. I mean, just wow. Just by reading the two first paragraphs, I really like the *they bleed together, creating a plethora of images- conjoined, their edges disintegrating* you have ...

Okay so first of all, let me make myself clear- I despise the sun. Not it’s warmth, or the fact it’s beautiful- but because of the thoughts linked to it. ...

Hello hello Katnes, here for a review ^^ Umm so to begin with, I’m not sure if it’s an error.. but since when sky has a S at the beginning..? ...

I think your poem is really beautiful. And I’ll say it, entrancing. You do a really good job with the catchphrase at the beginning (you’ve killed me now) which is ...