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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sometimes You Have to Let Go

    First off, I would just like to say that this poem was actually really good! I know you seemed kind of worried about it, but its definetly not as bad ...

    May 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Fragile

    This poem is really short, but somehow you still manage to fit so much emotion into it. With only a few lines, I was able to understand what was happening. ...

    May 16, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition

    Ahahahah, I loved this! It was very entertaing and amusing... eesh never knew I could actually enjoy reading shakespeare this much :P This is a really unique assignment, and I ...

    May 16, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: She was known for her disappearances

    I think you have a really good story here. I like your writing style and the story is interesting. The only issue that really stood out to me was this ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Personal Portal to Paradise

    I really enjoyed this poem :) It was really well-written and had a good concept. You had some really nice descriptive words and imagery in here. I agree with what ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Wyvern

    This was a really interesting story. I loved the way you ended off! I will be honest, that the beginning was a little slow for me. However, the middle (especially ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dylan, I Hardly Knew Ya

    I really enjoyed reading this story. The emotion was very strong at the end, and it was easy to sympathize with her. The story is cliche, and I personally hate ...

    May 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I hate you.

    Loved this poem! The emotion was very strong. I also think that this poem is very easy to relate to. You did a good job of getting your point across. ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Math Class Dreams

    Ahahaha, this was a cute poem. It made me smile. (: I know exactly how you must have been feeling while writing this poem.. especially with math class I just ...

    May 9, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No Manual

    I really enjoyed reading this. It was interesting. Many of us have those moments when we doubt who we are and who we want to be. I'm sure many other ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Dreams Are For You

    I loved the message behind this poem, very powerful! However, I stumbled over some words as I was reading it. It didn't seem to flow that smoothly. Also, you switched ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: If You Fell...

    Aww, I really enjoyed this poem! Short and sweet, well in a sad way. I think it really goes well with the other poem. (I actually read and reviewed that ...

    May 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Silence

    This was a really good poem! I enjoyed reading it, and especially like the repetition through out. It kept a nice steady beat. The emotion in the poem was lacking, ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Hurting Heart

    Awe, I really enjoyed this poem. I could definetly feel the emotion in this poem. It had a very sad tone to it. Great work! There was also some great ...

    May 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Poured Out

    I loved this poem. The imagery and emotion were both very strong I thought. The story behind it was a little fuzzy and confusing. It did allow the reader to ...

    May 7, 2011


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