silentwords

I really liked this poem :) I especially liked the way you wrote this, it was creative and effective. The repeatition was really great and powerful. It kept the poem ...

Hey, I'm here to review your poem (: So, this was a really well-written poem! This is probably not the kind of review you were looking for, but I couldn't ...

I liked the question and answer concept that you have here! It is unique and interesting. I think you started off your poem very nice. The flow was nice, and ...

Wow, I loved this poem! The flow and serene tone to it was beautiful. Each line flowed perfectly into the next. I also really liked your title, and that is ...

This is a lovely song! The lyrics and word choice is beautiful (: I actually think this could make a good song. The only thing about posting lyrics on here ...

This was a really well-written poem! The emotion was very strong and powerful. The story behind it kept my interest throughout, and the title drew me in. There weren't any ...

I will be honest, that I was a little confused about what this poem was about. Is the person hallucinating/ dreaming or are they dead? I wasn't too sure :p ...

I loved this story! You're an excellent writer, and if you didn't say you wrote this on your ipod in a hospital I would never have guessed. The story kept ...

I really liked this poem! It had a spooky feel to it, that really drew me in. I also personally love rhyming poems, and thought your rhymes were nice and ...

Aww, this was cute! Considering you were only five when you wrote this.. I thought it was pretty good :P Ahahaha! I don't even remember what my writing was like ...

Ouu I really liked this! It had a creepy intensity. The story throughout was very interesting and kept me wanting to read more. I also really loved the description and ...

I thought that the ryhmning here was actually not that bad! You did manage to find good rhyming words (: I did find that the flow wasn't perfect though in ...

I actually really liked this. It was really short, but you still managed you put a lot of emotion in this. Of course I think that you could expand on ...

I really enjoyed this poem! There story behind it was very interesting, and I thought you gave the poem a very nice and strong tone. You also had some really ...

The title of this really drew me in. I think that you have a really good and unique idea here. It is not often that you see the girl as ...