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Highly emotional. And scary. I hope you're okay. And I hope writing this poem helped express how you are.

Basically they're different speech sounds. The rhyme isn't really a 3rd one but it isn't consistent so it's like a 3rd one. What I mean is that in poetry there ...

This has a nice turn around. You might want to try to be more concise with your words, like when you said you are loved and that is true is ...

Are you okay?

Thank you so much! Your review was of so much help. =] I am glad it felt mysterious. It was just an idea. Thank you.

Thank you! I was trying out chopping a poem up with an idea. I have to try again.

Well done.

This is a good poem.

This poem seems fun.

So incredible.

You should try to work on developing your ideas more into imagery. I cry hello is a good sign.

there isn't supposed to be room for favours on this sweating favorite line.

Can you change the color only?

Can you send me this in an easier to read format? I lost my glasses.

I like how you personified the wind as a person. This is a wonderful image. Maybe you could write a story about meld them into each other. It would be ...