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That%u2019s awesome. I tried to getting into art school with my poems. I didn%u2019t finish the application because I%u2019m po.

So many poems!!

So, good. lots of passion in this.

social stuff.

This poem makes me worry about you. Try working on it!

This was awesome. This had so much blah to the world and life i lived but it did come back to life at the end with almost made you look. ...

Such an incredible poem. I'm sorry.

Love it. I'd like to say that lonely graffiti heart didn't totally fit the tone of the poem, which is fine because it fit the theme and brought us down ...

I read it in a professional detatched voice, so I didn't catch the rhythm changes. On the second read of the orginal I catched the changes in rhythm- I see ...

Thank you!

How many writes do you do?

Such a good poem. It's sad and dark. Like it a lot. Try to keep some of the lines longer to be more complete thoughts.

Try to be more personal in your poetry, like i am alone.

Love it, thank you for the credit. Your's is much more personal. Appreciated.

Good poetry but horrible. Absolutely horrible. I wish you had some pogiant thought on this, something like you're doing better because... etc. Whatever.