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Between each stanza, you give a little description to the meaning and value of the lines, if any. I don't get to see why drugs and alcohol are such a ...

Oh hey, my 100th review, lucky you, or me, I should say. They are fearful. They are angry. They are foolish. They are wicked. They are slaved. We are protected. ...

as if it were a pregnant woman on medication. What kind of medication? Because this is very vauge and I don't even know how to picture this. Baring little annotation.One,Maybe ...

It was too painful to tell yet he would tell it anyways? Seriously? That just doesn't sound right. I don't like it >.

Lets make one thing clear, I’m not an idiot. I know that once the fire of a car reaches the gas tank, things aren’t pretty. That was pretty funny. =] ...

In a cave below they sit in wooden carts and stare up my pant-leg like ants on a rubber-tree. What significance does this serve? Please explain. I do like the ...

I started at as the dishwasher, which wasn't so bad actually. They played the radio in the kitchen so we could all sing along, and the costumers can’t hears us. ...

I like the whole poem. =] It's nice, I really do like =]. Thanks for posting. They way the trees seem to sway to the same music I like this ...

Hey, welcome to YWS. By the way I like your name. And first thing is use imagery. Most of what you have is okay. I don't have any real problems ...

Upon our first touch of lips, Thank you for not using kiss. IT's completely over used. Now with all my doubts dispersed, I carefully write you a free verse. How ...

Inspired by a trip to Asiatic Lion sanctuary in Gujarat,India,[/quote] To a place where everybody had a fear deep, Do you mean deep fear? We feared none as we were ...

I don't like the repition of please dear. It doesn't work too well for me. and your rhyme is okay, it didn't feel forced which is good. Something about this ...

Cough cough, wow. I practically have nothing to say. I liked it. You're wording was good and it had a nice effect. It really hit me. Great job(honestly). The only ...

I Open the door & i see everything. Those horrible nightmares & degrading futures. A thousand bullets & injured throbbing hearts. Scattered rose petals ,Dead memories everywhere. & Death knocking ...

You reuse a lot of the words... I don't like it, it became boring and annoying at the end. Sorry. I do think you could do without some of the ...